The black shadow.
Bang bang, all of a sudden there was a big black figure it moved from side to side in the darkness. Then I heard a voice “come dear child, come”. I was petrified… I woke up, I was lying on the floor with several other children. We said to one another “what happened, what happened” There it was again the black shadow I screamed for help but no one came. Then all the other children got up and started walking towards me there eyes glee as I ran and ran and ran. I never went back again. One spooky night, when the clock struck twelve an evil statue appeared right in front of the smiths house. The smiths woke up by a bang outside there ancient house.
“What was that?” said mrs smith. They both went outside, and a statue was staring right at them. “What is that thing staring at me!” Mr smith said. The statue started to move then suddenly it walked right up to them and shouted “BOO!” Mrs smith and Mr smith both ran into the house screaming whilst the statue crept into the house then suddenly the statue went to the smiths… As you walk into the forest, you see a dark figure in between two trees. You walk closer as you hear a whispers in your ear “Closer.” You try walking back but an unrelenting force pushing you back to the statue “Stop running.” As you turn around, you can’t feel the force pushing you “You shouldn’t have done that!” Then suddenly a cold chill goes down your spine. Instantly a hand grabs you, pulling you closer to the statue the gaining more power, the grass dying in front of you. All of a sudden, you hear a scream of children. One spooky day, my friends and I was walking my dog until we saw something tall and black hidden amongst the trees. We all froze for a minute, then started to tip - toe forward. When we first got to the trees we couldn’t believe what we had found. It was a big tall statue, which stood up as high as the trees. We found a little bit of writing about the statue we had found. My friends and I were starting to read the writing until my friend said “Can we go now? It’s starting to scare me now.” One terrifying night there were three young boys, who went into the spooky woods in the middle of the night. They were playing games then all of a sudden they heard a mysterious voice. Out of a blink of eye they saw something strange, then a zoom came past so they just didn’t bother to look what it was. As they were walking in the woods, they saw the trees trying to grab them, so they ran as fast as they could so they could get away. Suddenly they saw a statue then they felt a hand … To celebrate Halloween, some of our class have entered the Willington Town Council spooky pumpkin competition. Do you dare watch our terrifying video? Do you like our newspaper reports about the discovery of Tutankhamun's tomb? We tried hard to include all of the key facts as well as features of newspaper reports such as columns, quotations, past tense and a headline.
The prompt this week is a picture. Look at it carefully and really use your imaginations when thinking about your writing!
Your writing could be about anything you like, as long as it related to the picture in some way and is 100 words long. Please send your replies by Friday 24th October. Some of our class went to the tag rugby festival at Parkside on Friday. After working very hard at the festival and in the after school club, we were extremely proud to come 2nd place in our group ahead of Hunwick Primary School, Our Lady St Thomas and Wolsingham. This meant we had a space in the semi-final. Eventually we came 4th out of 10 schools. Well done to everyone who took part and who attended the after school club. It was one of the most popular clubs we have ever had!
By Hannah One day a group of men walked down to a coffee shop and they walked for a while down the long road. They had finally reached the posh, deserted café. They could not believe the smell of the place, it was as if it was abandoned after a war. They entered the kitchen until they reached inside, when the door slammed on them and they had noticed that they couldn’t breathe as if the oxygen had vanished from the room. Despite barely being able to breathe oxygen in, they cried, “Help!” After that they were found on the floor, dead from lack of oxygen.
As I travelled deeper and deeper into the cave, I could not believe the smell. As I travelled deeper the smell got stronger and I wondered what was creating it. I found two trails one the smell was coming from the other one it wasn’t. I decided to go down the one the smell wasn’t coming from, dead end. I had only one choice, to follow the disgusting smell. Next I reached a deep cavern with a bridge stretching across it. When I started to walk across the bridge it fell down into the chasm below and I fell down!
The prompt this week is keeping with the senses as with last week's prompt. Remember that you can write about whatever you want, as long as these words are included and you write 100 words. This week's prompt is:
…I could not believe the smell… Make sure you check your pieces before posting. Sometimes they need checking to make sure that they make sense and you have included punctuation. Reading your work out loud often helps to see where you need to make changes. Please reply by 18th October. |
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