Your writing could be about anything you like, as long as it related to the picture in some way and is 100 words long. Please send your replies by Friday 24th October.
The prompt this week is a picture. Look at it carefully and really use your imaginations when thinking about your writing!
Your writing could be about anything you like, as long as it related to the picture in some way and is 100 words long. Please send your replies by Friday 24th October.
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Jenson
23/10/2014 07:19:39 pm
One calm windy day Brian O Konner was having a nice stole through the forest and then a black hooded figure appeared. He went up to him to see if he was a statue. He ran to his car (Nissan skyline) and drove away. At night he went to a street race his friends were there Dom Vince and Jessie .We lined up at the finish line Dom was in his Mazda rx7 Vince was in a Nissan Silvia and Jessie was in a Vauxhall Astra twin turbo. We revved our engines. And off we went Dom just past me.
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Ellie
23/10/2014 07:20:30 pm
Once upon a time I was in the woods with my dad. We saw a statue that looked like a reaper. My dad panicked and yelled “something is touching me!” Then my dad froze, then I freaked out. There was the reaper in front of me I looked beside me and the reaper was there. I was going to run for my life but I heard voices saying my name over and over again but then he or she said you “will die or be on my side.” I said “What a you playing with!” Quickly everything froze sadly again.
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callumt
23/10/2014 07:22:37 pm
When I landed I looked about in wonder. Then I saw a long staircase going upwards and there was a light at the end so climbed up it. When I reached the surface I found myself in a forest. I found a gap through the trees. After a while of walking I sat down, when I looked back up I found that all of the trees had changed so that they were all crooked, black and had lost all of their leaves even though it was the middle of summer! I saw a figure still there then everything went black.
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Leon
23/10/2014 07:22:48 pm
As you walk into the forest, you see a dark figure in between two trees. You walk closer as you hear a whispers in your ear “Closer.” You try walking back but an unrelenting force pushing you back to the statue “Stop running.” As you turn around, you can’t feel the force pushing you “You shouldn’t have done that!” Then suddenly a cold chill goes down your spine. Instantly a hand grabs you pulling you closer to the statue the gaining more power, the grass dying in front of you. All of a sudden, you hear a scream of children.
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Bethany
23/10/2014 07:22:59 pm
The black shadow.
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Jenson
23/10/2014 07:27:38 pm
fantastic
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Leon
23/10/2014 07:28:31 pm
That was scary.
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Ciaran
23/10/2014 07:23:59 pm
Once upon a time there lived 3 little children who loved to laugh and play but one day they went in the woods to play .They saw a funny Halloween statue so they tried to climb it until someone said “Stop climbing on me!” .”Who said that? they all asked .”Me!” answered the statue.” “Aaaaaah!”They cried and ran. They all ran as fast as a cheetah until 1 of them got caught In a branch .The other 2 picked up the other one and ran .They got home and the terrifieng statue was at the door waiting for them all.
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Tony
23/10/2014 07:24:56 pm
One spooky night, when the clock struck twelve an evil statue appeared right in front of the smiths house. The smiths woke up by a bang outside there ancient house.
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Courtney
23/10/2014 07:26:09 pm
One spooky day, my friends and I was walking my dog until we saw something tall and black hidden amongst the trees, we all froze for a minute, then started to tip - toe forward. When we first got to the trees we couldn’t believe what we had found. It was a big tall statue, which stood up as high as the trees. We found a little bit of writing about the statue we had found. My friends and I were starting to read the writing until my friend said “Can we go now? It’s starting to scare me now.”
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Kieran
23/10/2014 07:27:53 pm
Once upona time there were 2 children who was about to go Halloweening. As they were walking through the deep dark forest they saw a creepy statue. As it came dark they started two look at it the trees were waving, the bats were flying around. Then they went to some houses for trick or treet as they were trick or treeting they was something following us “Look look its that statue again!” so they ran back to they forest and something toached them right down the sping and the statue was just about to kill them bang bang bang.
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Rhianna
23/10/2014 07:32:06 pm
One Halloween night, some kids who were called Sophie, Emily and Charlie were all playing trick or treating. Then they went through the woods for a shortcut then Charlie whispered “look at that tall black hooded man” “should we go and check it out” cried Sophie. So they went and checked it out “I am scared can we go now please begged Charlie.” After they went Sophie looked behind her and she saw the black hooded tall person behind her. “Look there that tall person again” then Charlie went up and put her hand on the tall black person …
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Declan
23/10/2014 07:48:48 pm
One terrifying night there were three young boys, who went into the spooky woods in the middle of the night. They were playing games then all of a sudden they heard a mysterious voice. Out of a blink of eye they saw something strange then a zoom came past so they just didn’t bother to look what it was. As they were walking in the woods they saw the trees trying to grab them, so they ran as fast as they could so they could get away. Suddenly they saw a statue then they felt a hand … … …
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Keira
23/10/2014 07:51:34 pm
One day me and my sister Olivia was playing in a scary woods it had bats and the trees were waving side to side. When we started playing then we heard a mistress sound. We started following the sound we found something in in a Cape. Olivia started going really close to it I said “Olivia don’t go to close it might get you.” So she started running back the voice said “I will not eat you .” we went close together it came close to we went back a bite it said “Come back I will not hert you.”
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Hannah
23/10/2014 08:48:00 pm
Many moons ago, there was a little girl called Rosie. She was 9 years old and lived with her mam and dad. One day, Rosie’s mother told her that they were going on a look for a person that was lost. As Rosie got further into the terrifying woods she heard a noise behind the rustling trees, she went to look behind the tree and there was a black hooded figure that was floating in mid-air. Rosie asked the figure who it was and he went to chase her. Rosie was never to be seen again. Will she be found?
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