One terrifying night there were three young boys, who went into the spooky woods in the middle of the night. They were playing games then all of a sudden they heard a mysterious voice. Out of a blink of eye they saw something strange, then a zoom came past so they just didn’t bother to look what it was. As they were walking in the woods, they saw the trees trying to grab them, so they ran as fast as they could so they could get away. Suddenly they saw a statue then they felt a hand …
Miss Potts
2/11/2014 01:09:02 am
A fantastic effort at the 100 word challenge, Declan. I like how you have included some personification (trees trying to grab) and you have also included some interesting words. Next time, try to avoid repeating yourself as in the first sentence you have said 'one terrifying night' and then 'in the middle of the night'. Keep up the good work.
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