One day a group of men walked down to a coffee shop and they walked for a while down the long road. They had finally reached the posh, deserted café. They could not believe the smell of the place, it was as if it was abandoned after a war. They entered the kitchen until they reached inside, when the door slammed on them and they had noticed that they couldn’t breathe as if the oxygen had vanished from the room. Despite barely being able to breathe oxygen in, they cried, “Help!” After that they were found on the floor, dead from lack of oxygen.
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Heidi (Team 100WC New Zealand)
19/10/2014 10:45:47 am
Hi McCauley. This is a very interesting and mysterious story! I like the way you described how they couldn't breathe "as if the oxygen had vanished from the room". Well done, I really enjoyed your 100WC.
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