While I was in the deep forest all of a sudden I was scared, I heard a massive shout and it was my cousin. He screamed, “HELP!” I decided to try and find him. While I was in the deep, dark forest, I heard a noise, which was another one of my cousins and I decided to chase him. Then all of a sudden while I was running through the dark forest, I felt like the trees were dragging me into themselves. The forest seemed alive as a wolf who was chasing me. Anxiously, I was trying to get to him, then I finally arrived.
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Mrs Pratt (Team 100WC)
5/7/2014 07:51:48 pm
Matthew, what a spooky story! I loved your image of the trees trying to drag a person into themselves, what a scary thought! Your story built up a strong sense of suspense and foreboding, well done. I hope you have been enjoying the 100 word challenges, thank you so much for sharing your work.
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matthew
6/7/2014 11:35:06 pm
Thank you Mrs Pratt.
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Louise Team 100WC
7/7/2014 05:29:08 am
I loved reading your story. It has such great descriptions and I would have loved to read more. Could you think of some unique ways to describe a deep dark forest?
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McCauley
17/7/2014 06:24:58 pm
This was a fab 100 word challenge but could use more direct speech!
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