When I took a step through the deep, dark forest with my friend James, we saw a tree that looked like it was trying to grab us and eat us for breakfast. Luckily, we managed to survive. It was almost like the forest was alive as we took steps into the unknown. We could see crossed sticks waving a sign of danger, but that wouldn’t stop us, so we ran away. When I stopped my friend was gone. I was petrified; I screamed his name over and over again, but there was no reply. I was afraid that I wouldn’t make it out the forest alive!
Anam choudhry
6/7/2014 08:00:04 am
Great suspense in this 100WC, grammar was also well used, good job!
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Conner
7/7/2014 12:05:25 am
Thank you for the positive comment.
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callum
6/7/2014 11:47:48 pm
It is very spooky.I would love to see what happens next!
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matthew
6/7/2014 11:49:45 pm
Well done Conner and very good grammar.
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Kirsty
7/7/2014 12:06:06 am
It has good powerful adjectives in there Conner
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Mrs Tucker
8/7/2014 06:24:45 am
Congratulations for having your #39 100WC showcased! Have a look at some of our entries at http://kidblog.org/Mrs_Illume/tag/100wc-entry/
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Luke
14/7/2014 07:21:37 pm
Well done Conner this story is amazing.
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