It was Christmas Day and Mark had booked a holiday for the family at Paris. There aunty had just came out of hospital with her new little baby, Rosy. Rosy didn’t have a room. So at the moment she had a room in the attic. It was the next day but the airport rang mark and explained that it was far too hot for the planes to fly. So mark past it around the house. Then the next day they rang back and said that they could get a free ticket too south America. They were very pleased
But it was far too hot …
It was Christmas Day and Mark had booked a holiday for the family at Paris. There aunty had just came out of hospital with her new little baby, Rosy. Rosy didn’t have a room. So at the moment she had a room in the attic. It was the next day but the airport rang mark and explained that it was far too hot for the planes to fly. So mark past it around the house. Then the next day they rang back and said that they could get a free ticket too south America. They were very pleased
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Miss Potts
28/6/2014 01:02:31 am
A nice idea for your story, Bethany. Next time, you need to take more care with capital letters for names.
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29/6/2014 02:19:36 am
Good Bethany - a nice idea to say that it was too hot at Christmas because this immediately got me engaged in the story. Why was it too hot at Christmas? - I thought to myself.
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Madihah
3/7/2014 03:48:20 am
I love how you made this story and I really love the name Rosy WELL DONE BETHANY!! :-)
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