One day, some builders went to work at a new construction site but to their discovery there was a GIGANTIC crème egg! "Hmmm,” said one builder. ”I wonder why this is here? Hmmm, let’s use our ladders and go and get the metal iron shovels so we can crack this thing open!” The builders climbed up the crème egg and cracked the egg open…Suddenly, a fountain of crème egg goo started to pour down the side of the enormous egg! ”OH MY! It’s not just a model…it’s an actual crème egg. Wow! This is so awesome - let’s eat it.”
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Mrs Johnson
9/6/2014 06:03:31 am
I like your story Angel, good use of speech!
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Miss Potts
10/6/2014 03:54:45 am
Well done Angel. I like how you have used a range of punctuation in your short story.
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Angel's mam
11/6/2014 02:12:34 am
Your story is very funny!Well done Angel.
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Tracey Ananmalay
6/7/2014 07:50:17 am
Hello Angela,
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