PIPE SWAM GREEN CAREFULLY HORSE
If you can, try to highlight the word so that your readers can see you have used them all. As usual, try to use as many interesting words, sentence types and accurate punctuation as possible.
This week the prompt is five words that you must put into your piece of writing. This means you should use 105 words altogether. They are:
PIPE SWAM GREEN CAREFULLY HORSE If you can, try to highlight the word so that your readers can see you have used them all. As usual, try to use as many interesting words, sentence types and accurate punctuation as possible.
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Jenson
10/3/2015 07:59:38 pm
One day John was riding his horse when he saw a pipe which was leaking he knocked on the green door and said “Your pipe is leaking” eventually John got to the river the horse jumped over it but John swam over it. On the way he met a sheep who was very ugly John carefully touched it. He said “What an ugly sheep it’s so ugly it turned my horse to stone. On the way home from the shop John fell down a pit bang wam thump he landed he got back up and set off home again after that he got to home.
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Hannah
10/3/2015 08:01:19 pm
Dear diary,
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Ciaran
10/3/2015 08:07:17 pm
One fine day, there was a teacher named Miss Ball and she got a job in Sunnybrow Primary school. She had a horse. One day she couldn’t come to school because her drain pipe was bust. The hole kept getting BIGGER and BIGGER and BIGGER until she had a flood so she swam to the stairs and ran up to her room. She carefully pulled her phone out of her pocket and rang the plumbers. After that she rang Miss Potts and told her all about it. She quickly ran down stairs and swam out the back door. Her sparkly, shiny, green dress was ruined.
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Ellie
10/3/2015 08:07:27 pm
Once upon a time there was a little boy called Timmy. He had a pet horse and it ate sugar a lot. The horse was called Pony. One day he went on his horse but he fell of the horse into some water. In the deep water he found a pipe there was lots of green fish. Carefully he swam and swam until he got back to his horse. He was shaking like there was a monster right in front of him. When he got home he said to his mam that he fell into some water. His mam laughed because his story was funny.
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Courtney
10/3/2015 08:08:42 pm
One beautiful as I carefully crept outside to feed the horses without my mam waken up, I realised we had a busted pipe in the back guard. When I found out about the pipe I just ignored it and went for a swam in the river, after I been for a swam. I realised the pipe was bursting on the green grass and getting under control so I went to ask the man over the road to help. The man did help without making a sound, until he went and my mam woke up to say well done for feeding the horses for your mam.
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Tony
10/3/2015 08:09:34 pm
dear friend it all started in London, In a dark , ghostly and gloomy street a castle , an ancient castle with flickering lights shining in the window. Suddenly a shadow ran past the window it was black and it had something green something long something like “PIPE” it was a big pipe. Then all of a sudden loads of humans came running out of the castle screaming and , crying and shouting “HELP” and some people swam across the oceans.
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Matthew
10/3/2015 08:12:29 pm
As I was strolling around the street I realised that there were many pipes on the shops around the river.
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callum
10/3/2015 08:12:53 pm
Splosh went the boat as it crossed the green water. Just then the boat stopped and I saw that I had hit a pipe that broke the engine. With nowhere else to go I carefully stepped off the boat into the dark spooky swamp. Just then I spotted a hut across a small lake. Thinking there might be someone inside I swam across it. When I reached the other side the hut was still quite far away so I hopped on a nearby horse and rode the rest of the way. When I finally reached the hut I hopped off the horse and went inside…
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Declan
10/3/2015 08:13:42 pm
As I carefully rode on my heavy armed horse in the street, suddenly green lights were flashing rapidly in the midnight sky. All I heard was a dripping noise which was coming from round the corner it was a leaking pipe, all of a sudden out of the corner of my eye I saw something quickly running like a cheetah. I saw a dark, gloomy, green house I was petrified then something crept up to me it was a swam of mosquitoes. I galloped on my horse rapidly away from them I got away from them for five minutes until they got me. . .
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Keira
10/3/2015 08:14:35 pm
One day a gouges brown horse swam very carefully and which has silver eyes the house was called Carrie and ran to a green pipe. Suddenly the beautiful horse found louts of dusting green slim then when the house saw somebody coming to wards her the young girl was called Sofia. Carrie was scarred so she clotted as fast as she could. Sofia ran after her and shouted “Wait I just want to be your friend.” The house came back than Sofia realised that she had lost her horse. Carrie ran and accidently hit the green pipe and water came out and hurt the horse.
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Leon
10/3/2015 08:18:05 pm
*Bang* the highwayman’s gun set of killing his victim then making the rich man tumbled down the green hill into the carefully he snuck away to his armoured horse whilst the law enforcement came riding to the crime scene. When they got there he was trying to get the horse to go quicker bur the officers arrested him. Later when he was in a cell the window was blocked be a pipe he already knew the prison was surrounded by a river he had to escape by night. After a few hours when there was no sun in the sky he could fit through and he swam.
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Jamie
10/3/2015 08:19:49 pm
Crash a horse came flying to words green pipe the horse swam in the lake to save a little boy from drowning so the horse could be a hero but Annabel the horse bit a person and then the people chaste Annabel into the woods but what Annabel didn’t know it was a trap Annabel ran into a net then the people tuck Annabel to a stable but a man grabs Annabel and goes into a trailer and took Annabel to a lab and expiramented on Annabel. A day later Annabel went home and carefully made it a happy place were horses could play happily.
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Aliesha
10/3/2015 08:20:51 pm
A little girl was lost in the eerie woods. She was terrified because a horse was galloping faster and faster towards her. She didn’t know what to do. She tried to run away but she couldn’t because the horse and its rider caught her, picked her up and took her back to where they were in the beginning. Beside her was a lake which she fell into. She swam to the side and tried to climb out but she couldn’t because there was a green pipe sucking her up. The mysterious stranger carefully took her arm and lifted her out of the cold, swirling water.
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Brendan
10/3/2015 08:21:35 pm
One day there was a boy called James riding his horse until he noticed a huge pipe was in the middle of the road. He couldn’t just leave it because the cars might hit it. James couldn’t lift it because it is way too heavy so he called for a pickup truck. Suddenly out of nowhere a bright green pickup truck appeared. James told the about the pipe and he carefully moved the pipe but when James was on the way home he pulled into the water by the pipe the man panicked and drove away. James was really brave so he swam home safely.
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Rhianna
10/3/2015 08:25:11 pm
One day there was a boy called Conner and he had a lovely shiny drain pipe, until he dropt it in the horrible mud…
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lewisb
10/3/2015 08:31:26 pm
CRASH the waves were eating the ship with the gust of wind blowing it side to side. The captain shouted turn to the master’s whistle as the lightning was striking. The gloomy dark clouds were in a shape of an evil horse it was the most beautiful cloud that they ever seen the boat it is splitting in half and shouted we split we split then they swam until it calmed down. Where are we a island where did this come from he saw a pipe what is that so he carefully tiptoed over water it is water you can have that green apple tree.
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