After a few days, I finally came to a little cottage so I ran as fast as I could and asked for some water. The owner explained, “You can have these beans.” I took the beans then threw them on the ground. A golden duck flew over and picked them up. I touched the duck but then I turned into a grey hyena!
As I walked across the miserable street, (whilst eating a sandwich) I recognised a voice coming from above me: “You need to have a wild adventure…” Feeling petrified, I climbed up the rocky wall and ran away.
After a few days, I finally came to a little cottage so I ran as fast as I could and asked for some water. The owner explained, “You can have these beans.” I took the beans then threw them on the ground. A golden duck flew over and picked them up. I touched the duck but then I turned into a grey hyena!
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6/2/2015 02:59:43 pm
Awesome use of the words Class 4! I hope to hear more from you guys next week, Also good use in your concrete sensory details!
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