One night, I was walking home until I heard some freaky footsteps. I looked around but no one was there so I carried on walking. Just then, I noticed someone mysterious following me so I started to run as fast as lightning but he started to jog behind me. After, I carried on walking home, but then he rushed in front of me and pushed me out of the way and stared at me for ten seconds. Feeling frightened, I tried to escape by looking for a different short cut. Around the corner, I was eventually home sweet home. FINALLY!
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Miss Anand Team 100WC London
1/2/2015 01:25:03 am
Well done Rhianna, I really like the way you created tension in such a spooky way; I am sure everyone has imagined they have been followed before so can relate to this tale.
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Joe Pasternak (Team 100 WC)
2/2/2015 06:57:31 pm
Hi Rhianna,
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