The street is as dark as the moonless sky. There is bits of light everywhere with bits of rain trickling down from the atmosphere. As I sprinted down the slippery street I saw a car. Its colour was as orange as a raging fire. At that moment I slipped down and landed in a trench of mud. Would I ever get out? In that instant I started panicking then I pulled myself out of the trench with a ripped branch. Just then I heard a twig snap. Nervously I walked up. As I got closer I saw an old man.
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McCauley
1/2/2015 09:52:00 pm
I like your use of adjectives.
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Bethany
1/2/2015 09:54:15 pm
This is very good and i like how you left the story with a cliffhanger.
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